ahhh finally making it back to comment after reading it at midnight. Sometimes rl takes precedence.
Let's see. Another brilliant chapter, I really loved the sensory scene. A good way of introducing Mikey to the wonderful world of scenes. I like how Dec was there guiding but not really interfering when he wasn't needed. Seems like a good idea for two beginners, esp when we want Mikey to have only good experiences.
oh and I just have to say I totally squeed when Ash was reading NIC. I was bouncing around telling everyone. Sigh. My other fatal downfall, Asher, sigh.
Sorry distracted. I'm thrilled with how you are leading this story. I felt for Mikey all alone the next day after such an intense moment between them. Can't wait to read more. Bummed I'm going to miss the final part by being in Florida. Stupid vacation. Maybe I can find dialup to go and read quickly. Yep you've got me totally addicted.
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Date: 2005-02-13 05:41 pm (UTC)Let's see. Another brilliant chapter, I really loved the sensory scene. A good way of introducing Mikey to the wonderful world of scenes. I like how Dec was there guiding but not really interfering when he wasn't needed. Seems like a good idea for two beginners, esp when we want Mikey to have only good experiences.
oh and I just have to say I totally squeed when Ash was reading NIC. I was bouncing around telling everyone. Sigh. My other fatal downfall, Asher, sigh.
Sorry distracted. I'm thrilled with how you are leading this story. I felt for Mikey all alone the next day after such an intense moment between them. Can't wait to read more. Bummed I'm going to miss the final part by being in Florida. Stupid vacation. Maybe I can find dialup to go and read quickly. Yep you've got me totally addicted.
huggles.